Monday, 13 February 2017

Congratulations Blake and Millar!

Today in Writing were learning how to use exciting vocabulary to keep our audience interested. We watched a video and read an article about the 416 whales that stranded at Farewell Spit in the South Island this week. We were sad that so many whales died, but we decided that it was a happy ending because 100 whales were rescued. They joined a new pod when they swam out into the bay.

Blake and Millar worked really hard on their stories. Look how many interesting words they included from the vocabulary chart! They went over to celebrate with Mrs Cowan - can you believe they got a principal's award for all their hard work??!! Ka pai, boys!!

Blake's story, page 1

Blake's story, page 2

Millar's story

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